Comments from Alison:
Comments from Amanda:
I think you
brought up a very important point in that having confidence about
technology is almost more important than knowing the technology itself.
Slide 5 - Grammar - “The photos is an” should be “The photos are an”
Just some thoughts I have:
I like your
project - I think you definitely have created something of benefit to
teachers. Perhaps you could initiate more conversation by creating
video tutorials or showcases of the technology tools
you or others mention and post them on your Facebook page. Presenting
this at a conference would surely give you a larger audience to work
with and help with building up connections on your page. The Music PLN
is moving to a facebook page too, so you’re definitely
on the right track with choosing Facebook as your forum of choice. As
long as you’ve found your niche with the content, the people will
eventually come. Great job Dana!
Comments from Amanda:
Dana,
First
off your presentation is beautiful and the whole general concept of the
CBR is clearly laid out. What I had found in your presentation was the
ability to present exactly what you
did in this project to you audience. I think you did this very well,
even someone that may not have any idea what the CBR learning model is
can understand what your were trying to do, so I commend you for that.
Although
you were not able to carry out your original plan for the CBR project
you clearly state what changes were made. Your challenge would
definitely
be just that. Since your target audience would have to go on at their
own discretion the problems that could arise would be a lack of
participation. What I really liked about your project is that you were
able to incorporate the social network Facebook as part
of the process since it was more likely your audience would already have
access to an account.
During
Phase 1 your project seemed to have started out on a high note and
teachers were communicating throughout the process. I also think it was
important that you did your best to keep
the communication ongoing by posting questions for discussions. Although
you may had hoped for more of a discussion, I think you did have a
meaningful collaboration session taking place with the time that you had
to do so.
What
I think you express so well in your presentation was the changes that
were taking place in your career and life at the time, I think this
really will allow your audience to see the
progress taking place with your project even when you were going through
major changes throughout this program.
Just a minor note in the reflection page. The statement:
“Generally
speaking, I think incorporating CBR projects into classrooms will help
students take responsible for their own learning, as well as be active,
rather than passive learners.”
I think you meant to write responsibility. Other than that I think this
is a powerful statement, using it as an opening statement for your
reflection page is brilliant.
Another
thing you added in the reflection page that I thought was a good note
was the timing your project took place. I too found that the timing did
cause issues to arise because of how
busy school can be especially during November – January. Another issue
that also seems to occur during this time was due to the holidays taking
place.
Giving
the project more time to generate more collaboration is a great idea,
not only for your situation, but I think others completing the CBR would
also agree with this.
Your
ideas for a phase 3 are perfect suggestions. I think adding
face-to-face interactions would provide more accountability for
participating in the discussion along with creating a sense
of community for your audience.
All
in all, I think you did a wonderful job with your presentation and
clearly stated the process it took throughout, which I think is so
important. You also give great ideas and advice
on how to improve the project for others interested in this type of
learning model.
I
hope I was able to provide you some positive feedback to make your
project better, but I think that you did such a wonderful job it was
hard to find anything wrong. I hope you are able
to present this at the your chosen conference. Great Job Dana!
Excellent critiques.
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