Comments from Alison:
Comments from Amanda:
I think you 
brought up a very important point in that having confidence about 
technology is almost more important than knowing the technology itself.
Slide 5 -  Grammar - “The photos is an” should be “The photos are an”
Just some thoughts I have:
I like your 
project - I think you definitely have created something of benefit to 
teachers.  Perhaps you could initiate more conversation by creating 
video tutorials or showcases of the technology tools
you or others mention and post them on your Facebook page. Presenting 
this at a conference would surely give you a larger audience to work 
with and help with building up connections on your page. The Music PLN 
is moving to a facebook page too, so you’re definitely
on the right track with choosing Facebook as your forum of choice. As 
long as you’ve found your niche with the content, the people will 
eventually come.  Great job Dana!
Comments from Amanda:
Dana,
First
 off your presentation is beautiful and the whole general concept of the
 CBR is clearly laid out. What I had found in your presentation was the 
ability to present exactly what you
did in this project to you audience. I think you did this very well, 
even someone that may not have any idea what the CBR learning model is 
can understand what your were trying to do, so I commend you for that. 
  Although
 you were not able to carry out your original plan for the CBR project 
you clearly state what changes were made. Your challenge would 
definitely
be just that. Since your target audience would have to go on at their 
own discretion the problems that could arise would be a lack of 
participation. What I really liked about your project is that you were 
able to incorporate the social network Facebook as part
of the process since it was more likely your audience would already have
 access to an account. 
During
 Phase 1 your project seemed to have started out on a high note and 
teachers were communicating throughout the process. I also think it was 
important that you did your best to keep
the communication ongoing by posting questions for discussions. Although
 you may had hoped for more of a discussion, I think you did have a 
meaningful collaboration session taking place with the time that you had
 to do so. 
What
 I think you express so well in your presentation was the changes that 
were taking place in your career and life at the time, I think this 
really will allow your audience to see the
progress taking place with your project even when you were going through
 major changes throughout this program. 
Just a minor note in the reflection page. The statement: 
“Generally
 speaking, I think incorporating CBR projects into classrooms will help 
students take responsible for their own learning, as well as be active, 
rather than passive learners.”
I think you meant to write responsibility. Other than that I think this 
is a powerful statement, using it as an opening statement for your 
reflection page is brilliant.
Another
 thing you added in the reflection page that I thought was a good note 
was the timing your project took place. I too found that the timing did 
cause issues to arise because of how
busy school can be especially during November – January. Another issue 
that also seems to occur during this time was due to the holidays taking
 place. 
Giving
 the project more time to generate more collaboration is a great idea, 
not only for your situation, but I think others completing the CBR would
 also agree with this.
Your
 ideas for a phase 3 are perfect suggestions. I think adding 
face-to-face interactions would provide more accountability for 
participating in the discussion along with creating a sense
of community for your audience. 
All
 in all, I think you did a wonderful job with your presentation and 
clearly stated the process it took throughout, which I think is so 
important. You also give great ideas and advice
on how to improve the project for others interested in this type of 
learning model. 
I
 hope I was able to provide you some positive feedback to make your 
project better, but I think that you did such a wonderful job it was 
hard to find anything wrong. I hope you are able
to present this at the your chosen conference. Great Job Dana!
Excellent critiques.
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